Sample report
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In today's world, education is very important for everyone. Some people think university should be free for all students. I agree with this idea to some extent, but I also think there are some problems. Firstly, if university is free, more people can go to university. Many good students cannot study because their family is poor…
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Your #1 score-losing issue
Coherence & Cohesion — unclear progression / paragraphing
Evidence from the essay“Firstly, if university is free, more people can go to university.”
Ideas are present but progression is mechanical: each paragraph is a container of separate points rather than a developing argument. At Band 7, each paragraph must build — claim, extension, consequence — and link internally, not just open with a sequencer.
Band 7+ rewrite example
Model rewrite of the opening (Band 7+ pattern): "Whether the state should fund university education for everyone is a question that goes to the heart of what a society owes its citizens. On balance, I believe tuition should be abolished, provided that places are allocated on merit rather than on demand alone." — a clear position in sentence two, a condition that previews the counter-argument, and no wasted first sentence.