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Band 6.0 vs Band 7.0: General Training Task 2 — Discussion Essay

The same prompts, answered at different band levels. From 6.0 to 7.5, the gap is rarely knowledge — it is the one criterion capping the score: progression, precision or control. These samples are static study material, free to read.

General Training Task 2 — Discussion Essay

Some people think it is better to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Band 6.0

People have different ideas about the best place to live. Some people like a small town because life is quiet and cheap. Other people want to live in a big city because there are many jobs and things to do. I will discuss both sides and give my opinion.

A small town has a good environment and people know each other. Houses are not expensive, and there is less traffic, so life is not stressful. Children can play outside and old people can enjoy a slow life. However, a small town has some bad points. There are only a few jobs, and young people cannot make a good job or get a big salary. Hospitals and universities are also small, so people may need to travel to another place.

A big city is very active and modern. People can find work in big companies and study in famous universities. There are many shops, cinemas and restaurants, so life is interesting and comfortable. But city life also has problems. Flats cost a lot of money, the air is not clean, and people are always busy. Many people feel lonely because they do not know their neighbours.

In my opinion, a big city is better for young people because they need work and chances. A small town is better when people are old and want a quiet life. People should choose the place that is good for their age and their work.

Band 7.0

Where people choose to live often depends on their stage of life. Small towns appeal to those who value space and community, while big cities attract people seeking work and variety. Although both have clear advantages, I believe cities offer more to younger adults, whereas towns are often the better choice later in life.

Life in a small town can be considerably less pressured. Housing is more affordable, journeys are short, and neighbours are more likely to know and support one another. This matters for families and for older people who may need practical help. The trade-off is opportunity: employment is concentrated in a narrow range of industries, and specialist medical care or university courses may require a long journey to a regional centre.

Cities reverse that balance. Their larger labour markets make it easier to change jobs, build a career and earn a higher income, and residents have immediate access to hospitals, universities and public transport. These benefits come at a price, both literally and psychologically. Rents absorb a much larger share of income, commuting can be exhausting, and the anonymity of a large population can leave people isolated despite living among millions.

Overall, neither place is better in the abstract. A city is usually the stronger choice for someone establishing a career, because lost opportunities in a small labour market are difficult to recover. Once income and flexibility matter less than health, space and community, however, a small town can provide the better quality of life.

Where the band is won

Task Response: Both essays discuss both views and give an opinion. The 7.0 position is more precise: it ties the choice to career stage and qualifies the conclusion, while the 6.0 conclusion repeats a simple young/old contrast.
Coherence & Cohesion: The 6.0 essay is logically organised and easy to follow, so coherence is not its main ceiling. The 7.0 essay links each advantage to its trade-off inside the same paragraph ('This matters… The trade-off is…', 'These benefits come at a price…').
Lexical Resource — the main cap at 6.0: The 6.0 essay relies on repeated, general words and awkward collocations: 'good environment', 'bad points', 'make a good job', 'get a big salary', 'very active and modern'. The 7.0 essay expresses the same ideas precisely — 'concentrated in a narrow range of industries', 'absorb a much larger share of income', 'stage of life' — without needing rarer vocabulary.
Grammar: The 6.0 grammar is mostly accurate, which is why lexis, not grammar, is the main cap here. The 7.0 essay adds controlled range: concessive clauses ('Although both…'), comparatives, passives and longer noun phrases, with errors rare enough not to impede meaning.

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Band 6.0 vs Band 7.0: General Training Task 2 — Discussion Essay — IELTS Writing Sample